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Kibushi

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PostSubject: Poetry   Mon Jun 18, 2007 11:02 pm

Something I haven't done in a while. Anyone who writes knows the horror of writer's block. LOL So, while I try to break free from it, here's two of my older ones. I'll add some more later.



Second Heaven



Whisper softly in my ear, once more tonight

as we lay awake in each other's arms

Listening to the evening rain as it gently tolls

the passing of the darkness to the dawn



The lingering fragrance of your perfume

as it dances slowly through the air

is it this that fills me with light and warmth

or the unerring beauty within your stare



And your kiss, such a vivid memory upon my lips

of the countless nights spent by your side

Where the closest I've come to finding Heaven

was to merely hold you tightly through the night





Willing Abduction



The velvet night slowly falls once more

and blankets your body in my arms

The grass holds you gently as you drift off to dream

and softly steal away my heart



My body moves of its own accord

as my fingers work their way through your hair

The stars may shine bright in the sky above

but Heaven's beauty lies beside me, here
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:49 am

nice poem. Let me guess the poems are dedicted to the nicest lady on the net. here goes one.

Warangel

I hear a large bang.
Every thing illuminates by light and fire
I run from the blast
Dirt ,heat, and ash engulf my body.
I will go home.
Too many people care about me to just die in this hell.
Thereís an ear piercing scream
My heart is in my throat as I run back towards the scream and debris.
I canít see.
It feels like a black hole with awful screaming surrounding me
I feel around,
Just to find my way and accidentally some thick liquid.
It canít be oil.
I can feel my heart jump farther up my throat.
It must be blood.
I yell, ďIím here, donít panic, and talk softly!
Youíll waste energy panicking!Ē
I hear a soft whimper and realize itís a little girl.
Bombs are so stupid!
The thing about bombs is that they kill all,
Friend or foe.
I find the little girl crying in a lighted corner.
Sunlight is great.
The girl looks like an angel glowing in the sunlight.
Thank goodness for cracks.
The crack in the wall let me see where the girl has been injured.
She bleeds from the neck.
Blood oozes slowly from the jugular vein.
I tell her to pray.
I canít do nothing else but watch the Iraqi girl die in prayer.
She truly is an angel
I cried today with sadness and some joy.
Joy came from living
Itís a shame that innocents and little angels must die in battle.
It canít be day one.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:05 pm

hmmm, interesting to say the least, i like it War

ill follow suit heres one of my old ones


My Journey

Wet, naked screaming from the cold
Forced from my perfect eden
Cutout of my perpetual supply
My journey begins

Clumsy and foolish I fnd a way
Sucking the life from me as I go along
Pushed from one extreme to the next
Finding my journey imposible to bear

Tired and wore without relief
Fighting to cling to a vapor
Viewing all in time what I have done
Into enternity my journey is over

I wish I could flee from here
Back into the crypic confines
Welcoming and worryless
Where my journey beagn
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:31 am

What wonderful poams ..I cant write poems
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sat Jun 23, 2007 11:47 am

try, its not as hard as you think.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Tue Jun 26, 2007 4:04 pm

i cant write poems either. Very good guys!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:58 pm

Thanks for the compilemen preacherman. You're poems cool as well.

Tcassidy2008 and samayou, try writing what you feel but be descriptive. For instance, if I wrote a love poem, I would write:

As I kissed her lips,
It felt like kissing water on a hot day.
Except My mouth wasn't just quenched,
My esscence was as well.
My life gained new meaning,
now that I have my life to share.

Just try it and see what happens. I'm sure you two can write excellent poetry. Try writing about the one you love, Samayou/Tcassidy.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:39 am

anything works, i wrote this one about a squeaking door

WD40

Listen!, hear that?!, That sound, there again!
Poring, seaping, tearing through my brain
Finding its twisted way down my bones
Searing on down, deeper onto my soul
The sound of bone against steel
Left over onlya fine meal
Wd40 could have cured it all
But instead it was left to squall
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:24 am

His bleeding heart, an open tome
laid bare for all to see
In a silent grave, he buried hope
of the woman from his childhood dreams


*kinda short, but written for something my brother's going through now. If any muse allows, I'll add to it later on*
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:35 am

SWEET KIBUSHI! Cant wait to read the rest of it! Very good!

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:02 am

hmmm, ok life experience

heres one i wrote about 6 years ago tell me what you think

Eyes of Innocense
In the eyes of innocense
There is no pain or fear
Where only love is abundant
Where no evil will adhere

Penitrating through in the end
The unjust angered and the lies
In the eyes of innocense
True feelings can not hide

Thrown back emotions
Peace now all but gone
Didnt want to see good-by
The fight now only left to haunt

Sorrow brings time
Too much time to think
Lost in an asylum
Pushed to the brink

Fought with all within
Of an end to no avail
Never wanted to see give up
Dear God Why Did It Fail?!
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